Thursday, September 19, 2013

The Feud - Alternate Ending

Saki's The Feud is a story that features an alternate ending. Provide an alternate ending for the story. (Min. 5 sentences)

20 comments:

  1. When the wolves came George and Eric were kept quiet so that wolves would not find them. But they were scraped and bloodied. The wolves found them. When the wolves found ate them. After a while the men working for Eric and George arrived and saw all scratched and bitten. The men were where families of Eric and George and told them what happened. Eric and George died the land was lost because no one took care of them.

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  2. When the wolves appeared the Van Riker and Stern people get in there and killed all the wolves.Then they took the trunk that was on top of them.A few ours later they got out of the forest land.Later they go to a hospital.Several days after they were recovered.Then George and Erik became best friends.A lot of years later they divided the forest land for those two.

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  3. The wolves come to finish a friendship that was just beginning. What an anguish! The wolves fierce looks and sharp fangs did both hearts beat rapidly. They wouldn't gain this new war. Suddenly, about a dozen of torches illuminated the night.

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  4. After he saw the wolves Eric entered in panic. George distracted the wolves. Then the George's mens arrived. George told them, not do anything to him, he's my friend. They managed to kill the wolves, but a man came out badly injured. Eric and George were saved and became best friends. But unfortunately his men came together to take the land. Then they managed to capture the men. They went to prison for 30 years. Until one day, came the man who had been wounded and kills Eric. George Stern, his family and the family of Eric stayed forever living in their forest. George died after 90 years old. Their sons, George Jr. and Eric Jr. replaced his fathers.

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  5. The wolves killed both of the men. Then eric's men and george's men arrived. They killed both killed all the wolves. By that time it was too late. They let both corpses in the forest they fought for so much. One day the families entered the forest and saw eric and george thrown there. They made a real noise of it. Initiaded an investigation and noticed some bites on the men. After that the families knew that the wolves were dead. The families were a little calmed when they knew that. But both eric and george's men will live concerned of that for the rest of their lives. Because they arrived in time to save the eric and george.

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  6. As soon as they realized that they were wolves.Eric was very scared,but when the wolves came up to them more to Eric and george cama the men of Eric on the one hand and george on the other side.The men forgot that they were enemies and both helped,and killed the wolves.When they killed the wolves men of Eric helped him,but to George the men of the could not pull it out and asked for her help to Eric.Eric demanded from them to heip you.The men together suceded in ousting george.George was very wounded.All together led to George to the hospital and to Eric.Both were forgiven,the men of Eric and George joined together and are now friends.When they went to the city together the people were looking for the amazed that they were.Eric told the people that were friends.The people were still amazed they could not believe.Eric and George decided to share the land.At the end of all the families of Eric and George were gathered together,they were both very pleased and happy to be together and to share the land.

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  7. When the wolves come faster to attack Eric began to scream and George said - we will die - and someone shot the wolves. When wolves die those were shot were mens of Geoge. And they asked - Both are good? Someone is injured - Yes and thanks for come - Eric answer . Do not worry we come to help. When they cut the tree to get them out of there, they took George first. After getting Eric them decided that none enters the propety of another without the two they knew. Then went home and became best friends ever.

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  8. After the wolves got there a masked man that lived in the forest got there and he killed the wolves,he saved them but they were still hurt.Then he draged them to his old cabin in the forest that was hidden and nobody knew of.Then he gave them medical treatment they were unconscious for a week.When they woke up they didnt know where they where and they started questioning the masked man.Then the masked man escorted them out of the forest and then they never fought for the forest,they became friends,started hunting together and the masked man disappeared for ever.

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  9. When the wolves arrived, at which point the two armies of Erik and George arrived. They killed the wolves and rescued Erik and George. When rescued started talking to remember arguing. And there was a time to laugh. And then began to argue about the ground before they fought.

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  10. As Eric and George realized they were wolves froze . Eric Volt her head and noticed that his gun was not far from the . Then Eric said George ! Under that branch is my gun. But as the take it? Asked George in a shaky voice . Next to your left is a branch singing , if I try to reach out and pull her give me did I answer Eric . George branch happened to Eric , this managed to reach the gun when suddenly a wolf jumps up George . Eric Help me help me! - Shouted George . Very scared Eric took the gun and shot the wolf. When suddenly out five wolves . Eric began shooting and only managed to kill three when time says : You can be damn I ran out of bullets. George really scared began to shout for help , help! At that moment Eric men and shot them to the wolves. Eric told his men not to shoot Quiet . Help him out to the first. The men were very surprised but George pulled first and then Eric . At that moment more wolves . Eric told his men : bring to George from here I'll take care of the wolves . George said you're crazy you do not you will not overcome them all. Do not worry about me I'll be fine . But if I do not return Please tell my family I love them and that was the reason for my existence. I answer : Eric crying. George crying hug him and assure him that if he returned he would speak with his family and tell them everything. George went with Eric and men made ​​it to his house . By autumn day command his men to find out if Eric had appeared. After an hour these they confirmed that no. George was very sad to talk to Eric's family . After speaking with the family of Eric . When the moment he got up from the chair in his room to pour a glass of wine and suddenly : TOC , TOC ! They knocked on the door. George Abriola door and was shocked , it was Eric and his family , They embraced and entered. Eric told him everything that happened and how I manage to survive . After that both families came together and shared the land.



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  11. When the tree fell on both of them and couldn't move they fought to get out.One of them got out leaving the other to death.While he was running the wolves found him and surrounded him.He tried to run but the wolves caught up to him and ate him leaving only pieces of him.The other man never got to get out and died there alone.Their families cried for them but never stopped the feud between them passing it to son by son.The end.

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  12. The wolves ranto them.When the wolves were around George escape in the trees! George remenber that Erik wanted to kill him. Erik screamed to George '' save me save me '' but George said no! You erlier wnted to kill me. But now you will die by accident. I will tll your family of your death. George ran and escape. But Erik was killed by the wolves.

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  13. When the wolves came to Erick Van Riker and Gorge Stern the mens of Gorge appear and they kill all the wolve.After that they pulled Gorge and Erick.When they pulled Erick say thanks I give you one Gorge.Erick gave a part of the land to Gorge.Then Gorge Stern betrayed Erick Van Riker and Gorge killed and Gorge stayed with the whole ground.

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  14. When Eric saw the arrival of the wolves, I told George in a tone very soft. Luckily Eric weapon was very near him, but could not reach it with his hand. I picked and plucked a fallen tree branch and was able to reach it. He told George not to make noise so that the wolves were. But George can not take his nerves and began to cry very hard, you could hear wolves. Eric quickly he saw that the wolves were coming I picked his weapon, but only had four bullet and were five wolves. When I can shoot the last four saw running toward him. The lifted and closed his eyes and prepared to die. But suddenly Eric hear a'' boom'' and opened his eyes wide, and the wolf was at the head of the dead. Luckily it was one of the men of George with his face all scraped and a wound on his arm. After that helps, George asked, and the other where they are? George man his name was Bruss. He stood silent a minute and said, sorry could not survive there are many wolves in the forest, get out of here as fast as possible before we are..

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  15. The wolves they ate Erick but a Gorge no.After the people of Erick arrived.Gorge explain what happen but they dont beleive and they killed Gorge Then the people of Gorge appear and they fight among themselves.And none stayed with the land end.

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  16. The two men were very frightened, because they know have a sad end. They would not see his family again and failed the mission. At least they became friends and falthough knew that they would die that night, they were at peace. Then were heard approaching the wolves howlwd and heavily under the moon. In the distance wher their eyes shine, came the silence, all i have just before dawn.

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  17. When the wolves appeared,George and Erick decide to hide away,but a tree trunk fall on top of them and getting caugh. They but try lifting the trunk but was very heavy. The wolves apperad and the people van riker and stern get in to there to and killed all the wolves . Then helped to take up the trunk of George and Erick. Then both family pointed with a weapons and George said a did not want fight , Erick said the same. They but became good friends, and as a sign of this new friendship. They made a party in the wood and never was more fights .

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  18. They were actually wolves. But three men were coming behind them wolve.afortunatly traian the weapons and shot and killed The wolves. These three men were friends of Erick and managed to rescue them alive. After this experience the wounded were more friends than ever.

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  19. George and Erick tried to cover with the branches of the tree that had fallen. Incredibly ceived wolves prey in the distance and ran after them. When they arrived a couple of minutes behind the hunter who came wolves and noting the presence of the injured men decided to help them and take them to city to received medical help. After his recovery returned to make friends.

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  20. The wolves tried to kill and eat them,but they couldn't.They wolfs still searching them to try to eat them.One of the men disappeared and the other one got into a cabin to be hidden.Then they did an agreement to divide the plot two portions.They become be ther friends.

    Michael J. Gonzalez

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